Some feedback on my story? do you like it?

This sounds very interesting, i'd love to read this as a book. Vampires are all the rage this year and this is perfect timing to release a story about vampires, however i do suggest add more drama to it, possibly friends try to break them up or ones health deteriorates. This is only a suggestion, and the plot itself is great, i just think you could spice it up a little. :)